Just one minor tweak... Done!
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In my headcanon all the Mini-Cons do is swear. If I were in their place going through what they go through daily as their entire prescribed purpose, all I’d do is swear too."Beep bleep bleep beep boop."
"You all gripe about the dubbing but trust me, the way the minicons swear it would be SO MUCH WORSE if we didn't censor those lines..."
Optimus: "What did you do to your windshield?!!"
Nice! And it's not just a well-done fight, but the rendering and framing are great too. Like, this shot is gorgeous:Speaking of some great fights, though, it wasn't a final battle, but it could have been...
I wonder what could be accomplished with some serious editing. Like, multiple episodes combined or just done away with entirely, with a liberal approach to fidelity to the original narrative. With enough condensing, could the raw material be turned into something worthwhile?Even a better dub would have precious little to work with in those scenes: long stretches pass without anyone actually talking, and when they do, it's a few syllables of mouth-flap. The camera lingers on Nemesis Prime for long stretches, during which all he has is animalistic growls and the occasional evil laugh and/or roar. It takes a long time for anyone to do anything; it's like they're fighting underwater. And this is an action scene, which is meant to be exciting and dramatic.
And, again, that was Armada. Energon is more of the same style, but with writers who seem to have just given up and played mad libs with "You serious?" and "Uhhh?!". Even the good parts (again, put on higher and higher pedestals until one actually rewatches them and recalibrates that expectation to This Was Okay, It Wasn't Gibberish Yet) were hampered by the dub format and the writing.
Excellent.Just one minor tweak... Done!
I wonder what could be accomplished with some serious editing. Like, multiple episodes combined or just done away with entirely, with a liberal approach to fidelity to the original narrative. With enough condensing, could the raw material be turned into something worthwhile?
I also wonder, forgetting about the existing cartoons entirely, could another story be told with the same gimmicks and cast that makes the whole trilogy more cohesive and interesting? Furman's DW comics were shaping up to be something like that - not without problems, but at least in the hands of a writer with basic competence.
Ah, got it! Thanks!Sorry about that, I would recomend starting off halfway through the episode or the whole episode for that matter, but if you want to see what I was talking about, start at 19:40.
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