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@  TheMightyMol... : (29 April 2017 - 06:05 AM)

Sanity is the crutch of a dull mind.

@  BlackMax : (29 April 2017 - 06:04 AM)

The former is needful. The latter is a situationally necessary demeanor.

@  BlackMax : (29 April 2017 - 06:03 AM)

I think people are confusing sanity with normalcy.

@  TheMightyMol... : (29 April 2017 - 03:19 AM)

So we can fix them.

@  Bass X0 : (29 April 2017 - 02:32 AM)

why would any sane person come here anyway? 

@  Telly : (29 April 2017 - 02:27 AM)

im not sane. my mother had me tested

@  TheMightyMol... : (29 April 2017 - 02:12 AM)

We're not weird. You're just too sane.

@  Telly : (29 April 2017 - 02:11 AM)

*reads through shoutbox* theres some weird people on this board  :thumbsup

@  Pennpenn : (29 April 2017 - 12:45 AM)

I guess it'd be something like "lit-cad-or-et" presuming the p is still silent.

@  Bass X0 : (29 April 2017 - 12:44 AM)

Your grandma loves you!

@  RichardT1977 : (28 April 2017 - 09:34 PM)

@BlackMax Thank you, Dimitri Martin.

@  Evac : (28 April 2017 - 07:55 PM)

Time keeps on slippin', slippin', slippin'... Into the future~♪

@  BlackMax : (28 April 2017 - 06:49 PM)

God spelled backwards is dog. Cat spelled backwards is tac. Pterodactyl spelled backwards is really hard to pronounce.

@  Waspinator : (28 April 2017 - 06:46 PM)

Time flies like an arrow. Fruit flies like a banana.

@  LordGigaIce : (28 April 2017 - 06:12 PM)

you too, eh?

@  Locoman : (28 April 2017 - 05:40 PM)

Well, I don't know about you, but personally I clawed my way free from the corpse of a goat during the autumn equinox.

@  LordGigaIce : (28 April 2017 - 05:37 PM)

Yep. Also diseases are painful. And trucks are weird!

@  Bass X0 : (28 April 2017 - 04:41 PM)

we're all someone's daughters... we're all someone's sons...

@  Evac : (28 April 2017 - 03:22 PM)

Your creative writing professor is a god, then.

@  Diecast : (28 April 2017 - 03:17 PM)

My creative writing professor read that to my class once, all those years ago.

@  Evac : (28 April 2017 - 02:37 PM)

Sorry, whenever anyone brings up anything related to badfic, I immediately think of Repercussions of Evil.

@  Evac : (28 April 2017 - 02:29 PM)

"No! I must kill the trolls" he shouted. The radio said "No, John. You are the trolls" And then John was a shitposter.

@  Locoman : (28 April 2017 - 02:25 PM)

you lived like a spammer ans died to an moderator

@  Evac : (28 April 2017 - 02:17 PM)

He lived a spammer, and died a moderator.

@  WorkbenchManiac : (28 April 2017 - 02:04 PM)

"Tell my tale to those who ask. Tell it truly, the ill posts along with the good and let me be judged accordingly."

@  TheMightyMol... : (28 April 2017 - 01:49 PM)

Fool! Snark is my friend! Allow me to introduce you to it!

@  Evac : (28 April 2017 - 11:49 AM)

And I... Have my sarcasm.

@  TheMightyMol... : (28 April 2017 - 11:47 AM)

Search history has changed! Spam forums triumph! And you....you no longer post relevant content!

@  Evac : (28 April 2017 - 11:46 AM)

Mayhem hazzzz planzzzz.

@  Nutjob R/T : (28 April 2017 - 11:36 AM)

Subforums don't die. They wait. And plan.

@  Benbot : (28 April 2017 - 09:44 AM)

Are there any plans to delete or move dead subforums?

@  MEDdMI : (28 April 2017 - 05:49 AM)

instead of blackjack, we have dice rolls in the RP and there was an actual card game in another thread.

@  Bass X0 : (28 April 2017 - 05:19 AM)

They could start their own Beast Mayhem with Blackjack and Hookers.

@  MEDdMI : (28 April 2017 - 05:16 AM)

There's plenty of talented artists in Beast Mayhem! ....though we tend to draw things that can't be posted anyway. :doh

@  wlg3 : (28 April 2017 - 01:15 AM)

I really enjoy the creative sub forums of TFW, though, like their kitbash and fan art forums. The creative forums have lots of talented, friendly people and is an active, supportive community.

@  wlg3 : (28 April 2017 - 01:13 AM)

Gotta agree with Evac... TFW has a lot of cool, talented people, but they're overwhelmingly outnumbered by unbearable neckbeards

@  LordGigaIce : (27 April 2017 - 10:20 PM)

I do enjoy the TFW podcast. and that subforum's usually very civil. It's the best place to actually talk about TFers there :D also the Radicons forum is ok if you just like looking at kitbash pr0n

@  Evac : (27 April 2017 - 10:18 PM)

There's some cool people on the site, thankfully. It's just the morons tend to outnumber them... Which is generally the rule on most forums thanks to the GIFT.

@  Evac : (27 April 2017 - 10:17 PM)

In all honesty, the better parts of the site are the non-TF parts.

@  LordGigaIce : (27 April 2017 - 10:13 PM)

yeah, and their love of 3p is just...i don't get it.

@  Noideaforaname : (27 April 2017 - 10:03 PM)

TFW can be... literal with the rules sometimes. Like, a discussion about favorite human characters gets LOCKED if you mention Agent Fowler because "all Prime discussion belongs in the RiD forums".

@  LordGigaIce : (27 April 2017 - 09:48 PM)

Also, as far as TFW's No Politics goes...it's nice in theory but then you end up with the current IDW stories that lean HEAVILY into politics and religion. I've had more than a few lengthy posts exploring the parallels between the IDW Decepticon movement and various real world socialist movements deleted because it was technically "politics." So hug 'em. I really only visit there these days to poke around the podcast subforum.

@  LordGigaIce : (27 April 2017 - 09:45 PM)

My person canon is that the Quintessons created Cybertron as a factory to make the TFers as mechs, but they became self aware and they revolted. then Cybertronian society began to develop and the events of the revolt became mythologised as the stories of the Knights of Cyberton, the Thirteen, etc...real events that became the basis for religion, essentially.

@  Evac : (27 April 2017 - 09:34 PM)

Timeout. Does it convert?

@  Nutjob R/T : (27 April 2017 - 09:29 PM)

.... Wait I think those are actually ninjas

@  Nutjob R/T : (27 April 2017 - 09:29 PM)

Fact: Transformers are mammals. Fact: The purpose of a Transformer is to flip out and kill people

@  ▲ndrusi : (27 April 2017 - 06:54 PM)

Transformers are alien space robots from space.]

@  Rycochet : (27 April 2017 - 06:49 PM)

Transformers believe they were created by <X>, others believe they were created by <Y> and/or <Z>. There are lots of theories, disagreements but ultimately nobody knows for sure.

@  Noideaforaname : (27 April 2017 - 05:11 PM)

Squid robits build machines. Machines decide they had enough of that and kicked the squid robits off the planet. Everything's pretty chill for a while until machines get mad for dumb reasons and break the planet. THE END

@  Bass X0 : (27 April 2017 - 04:22 PM)

Primus created Cybertron and The Thirteen. Then later, the Quintessons come to the planet they call Seibertron and use Primus' power; the plasma energy chamber to forge military robots Destrons and consumer robots Cybertrons. The Cybertrons and Destrons rise up and drive the Quintessons away but are unable to live in peace with each other. And so the Cybertron population become the Autobot army and the Destrons become Decepticons, with the Autobots renaming their planet Cybertron. Far far later still, bacteria that was present on the asteroid Primus imprisoned himself within has evolved into organic life within Cybertron...


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Obedience - A One Page BW Ravage Comic


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#1 Fulcrum

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 12:30 PM

It's finally done!

Originally written for this thread - http://www.allspark....showtopic=11598
The script is here - http://www.allspark....showtopic=23983

With much, much MUCH thanks to Dissever, who's awesome art carried my slightly bombastic, monologue heavy script. This is a slightly lower quality version due to Allspart attachment file restraints. Enjoy!

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I'm gonna go off on a limb and say Shipwreck is the most dangerous man on the GIJoe team, what with the constant-threat to the sacred and holy institution of red-blooded American marriage he and his kind represent.

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 12:34 PM

*squeal*

Wow, this turned out lovely, Mark. <3 I love it! I want to print this sucker out and hang it up on my wall. I can't believe it's finally over, I feel like a dork for taking so long to get the art finished, heh. :>

Edited by Dissever, 20 August 2007 - 12:35 PM.

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 12:36 PM

Oh yes! I completely and utterly love it, writing and art.

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 01:29 PM

I like it. I love fancomics. I just freaking love em!

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 02:01 PM

indeed it is fanTAStic.


#6 Detour

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 02:02 PM

Beautifully written, drawn and colored! I absolutely love it!

You're far too young to be this bitter and angry at the world....

I'm reading that with Roy's voice. Heck, I read everything you post in a laconic Irish accent.

 


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Posted 20 August 2007 - 02:04 PM

Aww, Ravage looks so sad on dead Soundwave!

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 04:42 PM

Holy Crap! That is some badass stuff Fulcrum! You are really talented to have come up with this! I especially how beautifully written it is. Bob Forward would be proud like crazy if he saw this!

Wonderful job man! Wonderful Job!

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 05:52 PM

*Applauds* Wonderful! Just awesome. I'm glad that you have been able to finish such a nice piece.

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 05:56 PM

Beautiful. Truly Beautiful.
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Posted 20 August 2007 - 07:00 PM

Great Job Fulcrum, It was well written

And as Always Dissever shows her ability to take nothing but descriptions and turn them into amazing drawings. A true artist with a great imagination.

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#12 MrBlud

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 07:56 PM

Indeed, I love when the fan community pulls together and releases stuff like this.

Especially when it has such fine writing and art. icon-ironhide.gif

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Posted 21 August 2007 - 12:06 AM

That's beautiful.
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Posted 21 August 2007 - 02:10 AM

ah

that was so awesome

the artwork was really great. awesomely accurate and tremendously well done. the shading is just gorgeous. i love that stuff.

you should submit this to the Mosaic project thing and get it printed in the back of some IDW comics icon-fire.gif
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#15 Fulcrum

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Posted 21 August 2007 - 03:27 AM

QUOTE(God Fire Convoy @ Aug 21 2007, 08:10 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
you should submit this to the Mosaic project thing and get it printed in the back of some IDW comics icon-fire.gif


How would we go about doing such a thing? icon-hotrod.gif (Also, I think it'd have to be rescanned and colored for print, since the individual frames are only 72 DPI)


QUOTE("X-BoB58")
I'm gonna go off on a limb and say Shipwreck is the most dangerous man on the GIJoe team, what with the constant-threat to the sacred and holy institution of red-blooded American marriage he and his kind represent.

#16 Drivaaar

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Posted 21 August 2007 - 04:24 AM

QUOTE(Fulcrum @ Aug 21 2007, 09:27 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
QUOTE(God Fire Convoy @ Aug 21 2007, 08:10 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
you should submit this to the Mosaic project thing and get it printed in the back of some IDW comics icon-fire.gif


How would we go about doing such a thing? icon-hotrod.gif (Also, I think it'd have to be rescanned and colored for print, since the individual frames are only 72 DPI)


I've already passed on the link to the Mosaic guys Fulcrum. Will keep you updated!

#17 Fulcrum

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Posted 21 August 2007 - 07:33 AM

QUOTE(Drivaaar @ Aug 21 2007, 10:24 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
QUOTE(Fulcrum @ Aug 21 2007, 09:27 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
QUOTE(God Fire Convoy @ Aug 21 2007, 08:10 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
you should submit this to the Mosaic project thing and get it printed in the back of some IDW comics icon-fire.gif


How would we go about doing such a thing? icon-hotrod.gif (Also, I think it'd have to be rescanned and colored for print, since the individual frames are only 72 DPI)


I've already passed on the link to the Mosaic guys Fulcrum. Will keep you updated!


Awesome, thanks! We're already making plans for a 300 DPI version.

Edited by Fulcrum, 21 August 2007 - 07:33 AM.


QUOTE("X-BoB58")
I'm gonna go off on a limb and say Shipwreck is the most dangerous man on the GIJoe team, what with the constant-threat to the sacred and holy institution of red-blooded American marriage he and his kind represent.

#18 Ursa Magnus

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Posted 21 August 2007 - 09:03 AM

Absolutely amazing. icon-silverbolt.gif

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Posted 21 August 2007 - 01:33 PM

So pretty! You two did an awesome job! The colors are perfect! icon-hotrod.gif icon-hotrod.gif
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Posted 21 August 2007 - 05:54 PM

FANTASTIC!!!

Great work to all those involved, I love seeing TF fans come together to produce qualitiy stuff.

BTW, I'm one of the guys behind the Mosaic project and look forward to talking to Fulcrum and Disserver about this piece.

Furthermore, if anyone else is interested in participating in the Mosaic project, all are welcome. Just send me an email at transformers.mosaic@gmail.com

Check out some of our work here:

http://www.allspark....showtopic=35806