Posted 04 August 2018 - 01:44 PM
With special thanks to the following for their influences:
Jim Sorenson, Simon Furman, Grant Morrison, David Lynch, K.A. Applegate, Johnathan Nolan, and Lisa Joy.
staring dog stares
Posted 04 August 2018 - 04:02 PM
a good start. a lot of intriguing consequences. I'd love to see more.
My only criticism would be paying more attention to grammar and missed words or punctuation, and one of the paragraphs in Vector Prime's section runs a bit overlong, but it's still very well written with good characterization and a sense of danger and looming disaster. I'm eager to see where you take this.
"Disabled people donít have special needs. We have very reasonable human needs. Our needs include freedom from abuse, violence, and mistreatment, the right to autonomy and self-direction, the right to represent ourselves, equal opportunity for education and employment, the right to accommodation, and societal inclusion and acceptance.
The need for accommodation isnít a ďspecial needĒ. Itís a basic human right. Itís a leveling of the playing field that allows us the same opportunities and chances as non-disabled people."
- Amethyst Schaber, http://neurowonderful.tumblr.com/