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#1 Fulcrum

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 12:30 PM

It's finally done!

Originally written for this thread - http://www.allspark....showtopic=11598
The script is here - http://www.allspark....showtopic=23983

With much, much MUCH thanks to Dissever, who's awesome art carried my slightly bombastic, monologue heavy script. This is a slightly lower quality version due to Allspart attachment file restraints. Enjoy!

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QUOTE("X-BoB58")
I'm gonna go off on a limb and say Shipwreck is the most dangerous man on the GIJoe team, what with the constant-threat to the sacred and holy institution of red-blooded American marriage he and his kind represent.

#2 Dissever

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 12:34 PM

*squeal*

Wow, this turned out lovely, Mark. <3 I love it! I want to print this sucker out and hang it up on my wall. I can't believe it's finally over, I feel like a dork for taking so long to get the art finished, heh. :>

Edited by Dissever, 20 August 2007 - 12:35 PM.

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 12:36 PM

Oh yes! I completely and utterly love it, writing and art.

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#4 Graph

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 01:29 PM

I like it. I love fancomics. I just freaking love em!

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 02:01 PM

indeed it is fanTAStic.


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Posted 20 August 2007 - 02:02 PM

Beautifully written, drawn and colored! I absolutely love it!

You're far too young to be this bitter and angry at the world....

I'm reading that with Roy's voice. Heck, I read everything you post in a laconic Irish accent.

 


#7 Drivaaar

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 02:04 PM

Aww, Ravage looks so sad on dead Soundwave!

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 04:42 PM

Holy Crap! That is some badass stuff Fulcrum! You are really talented to have come up with this! I especially how beautifully written it is. Bob Forward would be proud like crazy if he saw this!

Wonderful job man! Wonderful Job!

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 05:52 PM

*Applauds* Wonderful! Just awesome. I'm glad that you have been able to finish such a nice piece.

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 05:56 PM

Beautiful. Truly Beautiful.
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Posted 20 August 2007 - 07:00 PM

Great Job Fulcrum, It was well written

And as Always Dissever shows her ability to take nothing but descriptions and turn them into amazing drawings. A true artist with a great imagination.

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 07:56 PM

Indeed, I love when the fan community pulls together and releases stuff like this.

Especially when it has such fine writing and art. icon-ironhide.gif

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Posted 21 August 2007 - 12:06 AM

That's beautiful.
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Posted 21 August 2007 - 02:10 AM

ah

that was so awesome

the artwork was really great. awesomely accurate and tremendously well done. the shading is just gorgeous. i love that stuff.

you should submit this to the Mosaic project thing and get it printed in the back of some IDW comics icon-fire.gif
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#15 Fulcrum

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Posted 21 August 2007 - 03:27 AM

QUOTE(God Fire Convoy @ Aug 21 2007, 08:10 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
you should submit this to the Mosaic project thing and get it printed in the back of some IDW comics icon-fire.gif


How would we go about doing such a thing? icon-hotrod.gif (Also, I think it'd have to be rescanned and colored for print, since the individual frames are only 72 DPI)


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#16 Drivaaar

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Posted 21 August 2007 - 04:24 AM

QUOTE(Fulcrum @ Aug 21 2007, 09:27 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
QUOTE(God Fire Convoy @ Aug 21 2007, 08:10 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
you should submit this to the Mosaic project thing and get it printed in the back of some IDW comics icon-fire.gif


How would we go about doing such a thing? icon-hotrod.gif (Also, I think it'd have to be rescanned and colored for print, since the individual frames are only 72 DPI)


I've already passed on the link to the Mosaic guys Fulcrum. Will keep you updated!

#17 Fulcrum

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Posted 21 August 2007 - 07:33 AM

QUOTE(Drivaaar @ Aug 21 2007, 10:24 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
QUOTE(Fulcrum @ Aug 21 2007, 09:27 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
QUOTE(God Fire Convoy @ Aug 21 2007, 08:10 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
you should submit this to the Mosaic project thing and get it printed in the back of some IDW comics icon-fire.gif


How would we go about doing such a thing? icon-hotrod.gif (Also, I think it'd have to be rescanned and colored for print, since the individual frames are only 72 DPI)


I've already passed on the link to the Mosaic guys Fulcrum. Will keep you updated!


Awesome, thanks! We're already making plans for a 300 DPI version.

Edited by Fulcrum, 21 August 2007 - 07:33 AM.


QUOTE("X-BoB58")
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Posted 21 August 2007 - 09:03 AM

Absolutely amazing. icon-silverbolt.gif

SO very nice work, the both of you. icon-ironhide.gif icon-ironhide.gif

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Posted 21 August 2007 - 01:33 PM

So pretty! You two did an awesome job! The colors are perfect! icon-hotrod.gif icon-hotrod.gif
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Posted 21 August 2007 - 05:54 PM

FANTASTIC!!!

Great work to all those involved, I love seeing TF fans come together to produce qualitiy stuff.

BTW, I'm one of the guys behind the Mosaic project and look forward to talking to Fulcrum and Disserver about this piece.

Furthermore, if anyone else is interested in participating in the Mosaic project, all are welcome. Just send me an email at transformers.mosaic@gmail.com

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