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@  Smokey : (05 May 2016 - 03:54 PM)

Damn zoning laws.

@  OrionPax44 : (05 May 2016 - 03:53 PM)

All this zoning is starting to cross the line here.

@  Rycochet : (05 May 2016 - 03:34 PM)

Earth's most powerful soldiers are earth's last chance against the Spiral Zone!

@  Smokey : (05 May 2016 - 03:31 PM)

RANDOM ZOOOOOOONE!

@  TheMightyMol... : (05 May 2016 - 03:24 PM)

Want to buy car parts and hope they actually give you the right ones? Head to Auto Zone.

@  The Doctor Who : (05 May 2016 - 03:22 PM)

Want to build a shop and don't know where it's legal? Go to the Commercial Zone.

@  TheMightyMol... : (05 May 2016 - 03:21 PM)

Careful with these jokes, they could lead us right into the Danger Zone.

@  Patchouli Kn... : (05 May 2016 - 03:20 PM)

You're running to make a touchdown, when suddenly, you hear Linkin Park - In The End Zone.

@  Patchouli Kn... : (05 May 2016 - 03:17 PM)

The Princess of Friendship's secret dungeon - the Twilight Zone.

@  The Doctor Who : (05 May 2016 - 03:14 PM)

When you go to bed at 10, wake up at 6 and only get seven hours sleep? You just got Time Zoned!

@  ▲ndrusi : (05 May 2016 - 03:11 PM)

what's with this checkered orange dirt? why are there crab robots here? oh dammit I got green hill zoned again

@  Puny Flesh C... : (05 May 2016 - 02:18 PM)

I actually thought about changing my username to'Captain Friendzone' - cos it's ironic yeah? ;)

@  Smokey : (05 May 2016 - 01:47 PM)

@Paladin: Yep, that's what a friendzone is.

@  Locoman : (05 May 2016 - 01:00 PM)

I knew someone who got put in the calzone by a girl. Tomato sauce burns are no laughing matter.

@  TheMightyMol... : (05 May 2016 - 12:57 PM)

If you leave your mass graves open for random people to lie naked in, you're doing it wrong.

@  Paladin : (05 May 2016 - 12:53 PM)

isn't "friendzone" a made-up thing creepers use to comfort themselves when they get shot down by women who wouldn't willingly lie naked with them in a mass grave?

@  The Predaking : (05 May 2016 - 12:49 PM)

"You need to give up climbing that tree. That tree is so far gone, that it is cut down, made into 2X4s and it now a coat closet in Dallas."

@  The Predaking : (05 May 2016 - 12:48 PM)

I was discussing with my co-worker about him getting out of the friend zone with this girl:

@  Smokey : (05 May 2016 - 12:17 PM)

I smell BACON! BACONBACONBACONBACONBACONBACONBACON IT'S BACONNNNN!

@  TheMightyMol... : (05 May 2016 - 12:12 PM)

I'm not. I wallow in your misery.

@  ▲ndrusi : (05 May 2016 - 11:58 AM)

Yeah, so ham I.

@  OrionPax44 : (05 May 2016 - 11:20 AM)

Let me just say ahead of time that I'm suey for the pun

@  Steevy Maximus : (05 May 2016 - 10:44 AM)

I'm sure some are squealing with delight

@  ▲ndrusi : (05 May 2016 - 10:40 AM)

Great, a bacon pun. Now people making pig puns will hog the chatbox.

@  TheMightyMol... : (05 May 2016 - 02:20 AM)

I herd puns in here, what's the situbacon?

@  PlutoniumBoss : (05 May 2016 - 01:30 AM)

You've caused a stampede.

@  The Doctor Who : (04 May 2016 - 11:22 PM)

Truly moooving things, Foffy.

@  Foffy the Sheep : (04 May 2016 - 11:16 PM)

What have I done?

@  unluckiness : (04 May 2016 - 11:08 PM)

Don't have a cow, man.

@  The Doctor Who : (04 May 2016 - 11:07 PM)

Dude, calm down! What's your beef man?

@  PlutoniumBoss : (04 May 2016 - 10:59 PM)

Are you so sure about that? I don't think you've considered what's at steak here.

@  MidnightFox : (04 May 2016 - 10:56 PM)

No need to buffalo anyone.

@  The Doctor Who : (04 May 2016 - 10:54 PM)

Is that all it takes for you to cowtow? Aren't you going to try and milk it a bit more?

@  Patchouli Kn... : (04 May 2016 - 10:36 PM)

On second thought, I'm just going to hoof it out of here.

@  The Doctor Who : (04 May 2016 - 10:32 PM)

What sort of udderance is that?

@  unluckiness : (04 May 2016 - 10:31 PM)

MOO

@  Patchouli Kn... : (04 May 2016 - 10:26 PM)

Can I shepherd us to a different topic?

@  wonko the sane? : (04 May 2016 - 10:19 PM)

Ewe got that right.

@  The Doctor Who : (04 May 2016 - 10:18 PM)

Not to ram the joke into the ground or anything, right?

@  wonko the sane? : (04 May 2016 - 10:18 PM)

Bad jokes abound, wollen you know it.

@  The Doctor Who : (04 May 2016 - 09:55 PM)

Face it, Smokey, there's mutton you can do about it.

@  Smokey : (04 May 2016 - 08:51 PM)

Stop with the baaaad puns.

@  Foffy the Sheep : (04 May 2016 - 08:32 PM)

Positively woolish.

@  Patchouli Kn... : (04 May 2016 - 08:20 PM)

Well now, don't you feel sheepish?

@  Foffy the Sheep : (04 May 2016 - 08:05 PM)

That was meant to be a status update, not a shout. Oops.

@  Foffy the Sheep : (04 May 2016 - 08:03 PM)

Humor is the condiment you use to get the bad taste of life out of your mouth.

@  OrionPax44 : (04 May 2016 - 04:52 PM)

I try to raise my kids right.

@  MEDdMI : (04 May 2016 - 01:15 PM)

:D Nice, OP

@  OrionPax44 : (04 May 2016 - 11:38 AM)

My kids made a desert full of Graboids in Minecraft this past weekend. Including paintings of people in the mouths.

@  Robowang : (03 May 2016 - 08:09 PM)

Put a wombat up ya wanker, moit.


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Obedience - A One Page BW Ravage Comic


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#1 Fulcrum

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 12:30 PM

It's finally done!

Originally written for this thread - http://www.allspark....showtopic=11598
The script is here - http://www.allspark....showtopic=23983

With much, much MUCH thanks to Dissever, who's awesome art carried my slightly bombastic, monologue heavy script. This is a slightly lower quality version due to Allspart attachment file restraints. Enjoy!

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QUOTE("X-BoB58")
I'm gonna go off on a limb and say Shipwreck is the most dangerous man on the GIJoe team, what with the constant-threat to the sacred and holy institution of red-blooded American marriage he and his kind represent.

#2 Dissever

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 12:34 PM

*squeal*

Wow, this turned out lovely, Mark. <3 I love it! I want to print this sucker out and hang it up on my wall. I can't believe it's finally over, I feel like a dork for taking so long to get the art finished, heh. :>

Edited by Dissever, 20 August 2007 - 12:35 PM.

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#3 Blueshift

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 12:36 PM

Oh yes! I completely and utterly love it, writing and art.

Damn all the talent! Damn it all! icon-hotrod.gif

#4 Graph

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 01:29 PM

I like it. I love fancomics. I just freaking love em!

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 02:01 PM

indeed it is fanTAStic.


#6 Detour

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 02:02 PM

Beautifully written, drawn and colored! I absolutely love it!

You're far too young to be this bitter and angry at the world....

I'm reading that with Roy's voice. Heck, I read everything you post in a laconic Irish accent.

 


#7 Drivaaar

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 02:04 PM

Aww, Ravage looks so sad on dead Soundwave!

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 04:42 PM

Holy Crap! That is some badass stuff Fulcrum! You are really talented to have come up with this! I especially how beautifully written it is. Bob Forward would be proud like crazy if he saw this!

Wonderful job man! Wonderful Job!

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 05:52 PM

*Applauds* Wonderful! Just awesome. I'm glad that you have been able to finish such a nice piece.

#10 TM2 Dinobot

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 05:56 PM

Beautiful. Truly Beautiful.
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#11 DarkeklawGW

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 07:00 PM

Great Job Fulcrum, It was well written

And as Always Dissever shows her ability to take nothing but descriptions and turn them into amazing drawings. A true artist with a great imagination.

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#12 MrBlud

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 07:56 PM

Indeed, I love when the fan community pulls together and releases stuff like this.

Especially when it has such fine writing and art. icon-ironhide.gif

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#13 The Wombat King

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Posted 21 August 2007 - 12:06 AM

That's beautiful.
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#14 dcjosh

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Posted 21 August 2007 - 02:10 AM

ah

that was so awesome

the artwork was really great. awesomely accurate and tremendously well done. the shading is just gorgeous. i love that stuff.

you should submit this to the Mosaic project thing and get it printed in the back of some IDW comics icon-fire.gif
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#15 Fulcrum

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Posted 21 August 2007 - 03:27 AM

QUOTE(God Fire Convoy @ Aug 21 2007, 08:10 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
you should submit this to the Mosaic project thing and get it printed in the back of some IDW comics icon-fire.gif


How would we go about doing such a thing? icon-hotrod.gif (Also, I think it'd have to be rescanned and colored for print, since the individual frames are only 72 DPI)


QUOTE("X-BoB58")
I'm gonna go off on a limb and say Shipwreck is the most dangerous man on the GIJoe team, what with the constant-threat to the sacred and holy institution of red-blooded American marriage he and his kind represent.

#16 Drivaaar

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Posted 21 August 2007 - 04:24 AM

QUOTE(Fulcrum @ Aug 21 2007, 09:27 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
QUOTE(God Fire Convoy @ Aug 21 2007, 08:10 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
you should submit this to the Mosaic project thing and get it printed in the back of some IDW comics icon-fire.gif


How would we go about doing such a thing? icon-hotrod.gif (Also, I think it'd have to be rescanned and colored for print, since the individual frames are only 72 DPI)


I've already passed on the link to the Mosaic guys Fulcrum. Will keep you updated!

#17 Fulcrum

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Posted 21 August 2007 - 07:33 AM

QUOTE(Drivaaar @ Aug 21 2007, 10:24 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
QUOTE(Fulcrum @ Aug 21 2007, 09:27 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
QUOTE(God Fire Convoy @ Aug 21 2007, 08:10 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
you should submit this to the Mosaic project thing and get it printed in the back of some IDW comics icon-fire.gif


How would we go about doing such a thing? icon-hotrod.gif (Also, I think it'd have to be rescanned and colored for print, since the individual frames are only 72 DPI)


I've already passed on the link to the Mosaic guys Fulcrum. Will keep you updated!


Awesome, thanks! We're already making plans for a 300 DPI version.

Edited by Fulcrum, 21 August 2007 - 07:33 AM.


QUOTE("X-BoB58")
I'm gonna go off on a limb and say Shipwreck is the most dangerous man on the GIJoe team, what with the constant-threat to the sacred and holy institution of red-blooded American marriage he and his kind represent.

#18 Ursa Magnus

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Posted 21 August 2007 - 09:03 AM

Absolutely amazing. icon-silverbolt.gif

SO very nice work, the both of you. icon-ironhide.gif icon-ironhide.gif

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Posted 21 August 2007 - 01:33 PM

So pretty! You two did an awesome job! The colors are perfect! icon-hotrod.gif icon-hotrod.gif
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Posted 21 August 2007 - 05:54 PM

FANTASTIC!!!

Great work to all those involved, I love seeing TF fans come together to produce qualitiy stuff.

BTW, I'm one of the guys behind the Mosaic project and look forward to talking to Fulcrum and Disserver about this piece.

Furthermore, if anyone else is interested in participating in the Mosaic project, all are welcome. Just send me an email at transformers.mosaic@gmail.com

Check out some of our work here:

http://www.allspark....showtopic=35806






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