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@  Plokatron : (11 February 2016 - 03:23 PM)

Guess no one has the comic then. Blast I need that close up of Ironhide's helmet!

@  Arazyr : (11 February 2016 - 01:41 PM)

Happy Birthday, young'un. 8^)

@  D Buster Prime : (11 February 2016 - 01:21 PM)

It's my BIRTHDAY! I'm 35 years young!

@  BillBarclay : (11 February 2016 - 10:54 AM)

nah! it's Venus that's going to Botcon!

@  Paladin : (11 February 2016 - 10:45 AM)

could've also meant Cree Summer...

@  Dracula : (11 February 2016 - 08:39 AM)

Good going, Blackarachnia. I heard it's been hard for her to get roles after Hasbro brought in Airachnid.

@  BillBarclay : (11 February 2016 - 06:34 AM)

you mean Venus Terzo! she's supposed to be going to Botcon

@  Whirl Maximus : (11 February 2016 - 03:23 AM)

Blackarachnia was on Supernatural last night.

@  Plokatron : (10 February 2016 - 11:08 PM)

Ponderous slagging ponderous. Hey anyone got some good Hi-res captures of Ironhide in Infestation? I really need close ups of his head for reference on a project.

@  Plokatron : (09 February 2016 - 10:46 PM)

Ok now this is funny. I ordered a used copy of HoS GN and the one I got was a library copy once. It's marked Union County on it. Thats my home county. :D It never was in my library though. Mine is named after the man who built it not the town or county but still kinda funny.

@  Tm_Silverclaw : (09 February 2016 - 09:44 PM)

Is it sad I read "KF7 Soviet" as "KFC7 Soviet"?

@  TheMightyMol... : (09 February 2016 - 03:38 PM)

Neat.

@  Dracula : (09 February 2016 - 03:35 PM)

A what? Oh, you must mean a KF7 Soviet. Common mistake.

@  TheMightyMol... : (09 February 2016 - 03:22 PM)

Can I just get an AK-47 instead?

@  Telly : (09 February 2016 - 02:35 PM)

this is form 47-a. you want form 47-A. start again

@  MEDdMI : (09 February 2016 - 02:07 PM)

Now you didn't fill the form in black or blue ink. Do it again.

@  Rycochet : (09 February 2016 - 02:04 PM)

You made a typo on the first page of the forms, you're going to have to go back and fill the whole form out again, from first to final.

@  NotVeryKnightly : (09 February 2016 - 01:31 PM)

"bats"

@  Dracula : (09 February 2016 - 01:09 PM)

Nice and soft, you say? This isn't even my final form!!!!

@  Telly : (09 February 2016 - 12:47 PM)

its nice and soft like YOU dracula *bats eyelashes* and thatll probly be the last thing i post in this thing now lol

@  Dracula : (09 February 2016 - 08:52 AM)

It's course and rough...wait that doesn't work

@  NotVeryKnightly : (09 February 2016 - 08:43 AM)

It gets everywhere?

@  Paladin : (09 February 2016 - 07:57 AM)

i hate snow.

@  BillBarclay : (08 February 2016 - 04:58 PM)

btw one of the Transformers Victory intro's(not the original music used) on YouTube uses one of the pieces of music used on the US version of Transformers Armada

@  Rycochet : (08 February 2016 - 03:55 PM)

You should read it again, it gets better with age!

@  Whirl Maximus : (08 February 2016 - 03:46 PM)

I am fully aware of that story and mentioning it carries the penalty of fifty towel snaps.

@  Rycochet : (08 February 2016 - 03:31 PM)

Shh, it's a trap!

@  TheMightyMol... : (08 February 2016 - 02:48 PM)

See, you said "awesome" and "The Beast" in the same sentence, and I think you broke my mind with the contradiction.

@  Rycochet : (08 February 2016 - 02:42 PM)

No-one tell Whirl about the awesome dinobot combiner, The Beast.

@  Plokatron : (08 February 2016 - 02:37 PM)

@Dracula Uh oh were in trouble.

@  Rycochet : (08 February 2016 - 02:36 PM)

If you think that's cool, wait until you see what other stuff we're hiding from you.

@  Whirl Maximus : (08 February 2016 - 02:33 PM)

Transformers Victory's intro is awesome. And not one of you told me.... WHY?!!!

@  Rycochet : (08 February 2016 - 10:43 AM)

It doesn't count those using it on other pages.

@  Rycochet : (08 February 2016 - 10:43 AM)

If it's the one by IPB Shoutbox, it means the number of people who are viewing the Shoutbox page.

@  tffan01 : (08 February 2016 - 10:34 AM)

Where's the red numbers?

@  Lush City : (08 February 2016 - 09:23 AM)

Ok total newb to the shoutbox, but what do the red numbers in the corner mean?

@  Whirl Maximus : (08 February 2016 - 09:09 AM)

Thought it would lead to hi jinks and a lark like that movie Idiocracy instead it turned into something disturbing and traumatic like that movie Small Soldiers.

@  Dracula : (08 February 2016 - 08:55 AM)

You used MUNITION CHIPS in TOYS??

@  tffan01 : (08 February 2016 - 08:02 AM)

hi

@  Robowang : (08 February 2016 - 07:58 AM)

SEX

@  Whirl Maximus : (08 February 2016 - 07:48 AM)

I got bruticus limbs at FP last monday and Onslaught on Friday. Huge mistake, I inserted an X1000 microprocessor in each one and a extra for Bruticus, and they mopped the floor with the rest of my CW collection.

@  BillBarclay : (08 February 2016 - 06:18 AM)

i already got those(Scattershot & Onslaught) from Smyths Toys here in the UK, Asda's supposed to have the RID Warrior Class figures in(Megatronus, Blue Optimus Prime ect)

@  Plokatron : (08 February 2016 - 02:07 AM)

Yeah glad I ain't a bug or a bowwow. Hahaha

@  Plokatron : (08 February 2016 - 02:07 AM)

@Lisbon Virgo "I'm a black widow spider, you idiot! ...I can do both."

@  Daith : (08 February 2016 - 12:39 AM)

Better than still sitting on Cyclonus and Hot Spot

@  Telly : (07 February 2016 - 11:09 PM)

almost got excited earlier. my walmart got a new batch of cw voyagers in: onslaught and...scattershot :(

@  Smokey : (07 February 2016 - 09:08 PM)

San would probably like to die during sex.

@  MEDdMI : (07 February 2016 - 03:14 PM)

*clicks the non-existing Like button 100 times*

@  unluckiness : (07 February 2016 - 03:12 PM)

Is that Voldemort's Mini-Me?

@  MEDdMI : (07 February 2016 - 03:11 PM)

La petite mort https://en.m.wikiped.../La_petite_mort


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Obedience - A One Page BW Ravage Comic


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#1 Fulcrum

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 12:30 PM

It's finally done!

Originally written for this thread - http://www.allspark....showtopic=11598
The script is here - http://www.allspark....showtopic=23983

With much, much MUCH thanks to Dissever, who's awesome art carried my slightly bombastic, monologue heavy script. This is a slightly lower quality version due to Allspart attachment file restraints. Enjoy!

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QUOTE("X-BoB58")
I'm gonna go off on a limb and say Shipwreck is the most dangerous man on the GIJoe team, what with the constant-threat to the sacred and holy institution of red-blooded American marriage he and his kind represent.

#2 Dissever

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 12:34 PM

*squeal*

Wow, this turned out lovely, Mark. <3 I love it! I want to print this sucker out and hang it up on my wall. I can't believe it's finally over, I feel like a dork for taking so long to get the art finished, heh. :>

Edited by Dissever, 20 August 2007 - 12:35 PM.

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 12:36 PM

Oh yes! I completely and utterly love it, writing and art.

Damn all the talent! Damn it all! icon-hotrod.gif

#4 Graph

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 01:29 PM

I like it. I love fancomics. I just freaking love em!

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 02:01 PM

indeed it is fanTAStic.


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Posted 20 August 2007 - 02:02 PM

Beautifully written, drawn and colored! I absolutely love it!

You're far too young to be this bitter and angry at the world....

I'm reading that with Roy's voice. Heck, I read everything you post in a laconic Irish accent.

 


#7 Drivaaar

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 02:04 PM

Aww, Ravage looks so sad on dead Soundwave!

#8 Skullgrin140

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 04:42 PM

Holy Crap! That is some badass stuff Fulcrum! You are really talented to have come up with this! I especially how beautifully written it is. Bob Forward would be proud like crazy if he saw this!

Wonderful job man! Wonderful Job!

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 05:52 PM

*Applauds* Wonderful! Just awesome. I'm glad that you have been able to finish such a nice piece.

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 05:56 PM

Beautiful. Truly Beautiful.
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Posted 20 August 2007 - 07:00 PM

Great Job Fulcrum, It was well written

And as Always Dissever shows her ability to take nothing but descriptions and turn them into amazing drawings. A true artist with a great imagination.

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#12 MrBlud

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 07:56 PM

Indeed, I love when the fan community pulls together and releases stuff like this.

Especially when it has such fine writing and art. icon-ironhide.gif

#13 The Wombat King

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Posted 21 August 2007 - 12:06 AM

That's beautiful.
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Posted 21 August 2007 - 02:10 AM

ah

that was so awesome

the artwork was really great. awesomely accurate and tremendously well done. the shading is just gorgeous. i love that stuff.

you should submit this to the Mosaic project thing and get it printed in the back of some IDW comics icon-fire.gif
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#15 Fulcrum

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Posted 21 August 2007 - 03:27 AM

QUOTE(God Fire Convoy @ Aug 21 2007, 08:10 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
you should submit this to the Mosaic project thing and get it printed in the back of some IDW comics icon-fire.gif


How would we go about doing such a thing? icon-hotrod.gif (Also, I think it'd have to be rescanned and colored for print, since the individual frames are only 72 DPI)


QUOTE("X-BoB58")
I'm gonna go off on a limb and say Shipwreck is the most dangerous man on the GIJoe team, what with the constant-threat to the sacred and holy institution of red-blooded American marriage he and his kind represent.

#16 Drivaaar

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Posted 21 August 2007 - 04:24 AM

QUOTE(Fulcrum @ Aug 21 2007, 09:27 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
QUOTE(God Fire Convoy @ Aug 21 2007, 08:10 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
you should submit this to the Mosaic project thing and get it printed in the back of some IDW comics icon-fire.gif


How would we go about doing such a thing? icon-hotrod.gif (Also, I think it'd have to be rescanned and colored for print, since the individual frames are only 72 DPI)


I've already passed on the link to the Mosaic guys Fulcrum. Will keep you updated!

#17 Fulcrum

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Posted 21 August 2007 - 07:33 AM

QUOTE(Drivaaar @ Aug 21 2007, 10:24 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
QUOTE(Fulcrum @ Aug 21 2007, 09:27 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
QUOTE(God Fire Convoy @ Aug 21 2007, 08:10 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
you should submit this to the Mosaic project thing and get it printed in the back of some IDW comics icon-fire.gif


How would we go about doing such a thing? icon-hotrod.gif (Also, I think it'd have to be rescanned and colored for print, since the individual frames are only 72 DPI)


I've already passed on the link to the Mosaic guys Fulcrum. Will keep you updated!


Awesome, thanks! We're already making plans for a 300 DPI version.

Edited by Fulcrum, 21 August 2007 - 07:33 AM.


QUOTE("X-BoB58")
I'm gonna go off on a limb and say Shipwreck is the most dangerous man on the GIJoe team, what with the constant-threat to the sacred and holy institution of red-blooded American marriage he and his kind represent.

#18 Ursa Magnus

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Posted 21 August 2007 - 09:03 AM

Absolutely amazing. icon-silverbolt.gif

SO very nice work, the both of you. icon-ironhide.gif icon-ironhide.gif

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Posted 21 August 2007 - 01:33 PM

So pretty! You two did an awesome job! The colors are perfect! icon-hotrod.gif icon-hotrod.gif
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Posted 21 August 2007 - 05:54 PM

FANTASTIC!!!

Great work to all those involved, I love seeing TF fans come together to produce qualitiy stuff.

BTW, I'm one of the guys behind the Mosaic project and look forward to talking to Fulcrum and Disserver about this piece.

Furthermore, if anyone else is interested in participating in the Mosaic project, all are welcome. Just send me an email at transformers.mosaic@gmail.com

Check out some of our work here:

http://www.allspark....showtopic=35806






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