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Unicron, in Primus’s eyes, as mentioned in Energon, said that Unicron could possibly be able to turn away from evil and darkness. Primus knew that Unicron can change because it’s never too late to redeem one self. Primus had a task to complete before he could take his place finally at the Omni matrix or place of the gods, where they rest in their final haven; like in Greek mythology, Mt. Olympus. Primus final task was to confront and defeat Unicron from his evils and destructiveness.

Primus was said by the canon of Energon, told that Unicron isn’t far from being beyond positive change and help. Unicron can be redeemed and restrained from doing anymore evil deeds. Primus knows when Unicron accepts being helped and guided to a path of justice and good, it will be that he, Primus, who is the authority figure. Unicron is to be submissive to him and follow his rules as he has the power and the force supporting order and light or harmony and enlightenment of goodness.

Unicron will be expected to recreate every morsel he had ever destroyed over many eons of time since the beginning and that includes the damaged structural part of Cybertron. He will learn to be courageous, kind, compassionate, friendly, gentile, modest, radical, honor, respect, hope, trustworthy, praise, fruitful, feeble, inspirational, loyal, and reliable. He can and must repent for all his impieties and surrender himself to Primus for all his queries he ever had from the commencement.

The seven main virtues of life and resolutions to see more clearly is what he will meditate on. He soon begins to rebirth his soul to one of good and that he will see the light. To imagine one who is so bad would become one of good bidding toward Primus and for others to reflect upon him as. Will Primus in due time ever forgive his brother as he has seen that his mere calculations of this was correct. Can one being save another’s soul from certain death? He will take his awareness of how he can gain contemplation that he will take the responsibility for his power as there are consequences for all circumstances of that power. He will give up unquestionably his planet devouring mode for a life giving mode as his brother did before him.

He takes the place as a pun toward the jurisdiction of Primus. He must answer for everything and Primus doesn’t have to answer to him because he is superior and Unicron is inferior. Unicron will answer, listen, and learn, be taught, be trained, to be helped and guided to justice and prosperity. Unicron will become aware of his ways, his actions, and his words, as he begins a new path, a rebirth of his old self and be a new being of purity and consciousness. Unicron will do good deeds and help others who need it as he gains a compassionate mind and opportunity to show that he can make a positive difference.

-My associated plot role for Unicron-

-Name's Deborah and I’m 24 yrs old-

-This is called, Unicron-
Fishbug
One's a hard-working grocery bagger. The other farms pineapples in the alps. Together they are friends, lovers, and crime fighters.
MutantX
Can you write a story about how Unicron shows Primus the song about beans being a musical fruit?
HeyMickey
I'd like to hear a story about Unicron frolicking with wild petro-rabbits.
Omgiamonfire
Stungun
Maybe you should not post these in GD? Maybe Chronicles of CYbertron would be better for you to hone your, writing skills.
Varnon
I'll be honest.
It sounds just terrible, like awful.

Try replacing Primus with God and Unicron with Satan and see how it sounds.
I know Primus and Unicron are not exact equivalents of God and Satan, but that is the connotation they have. They represent absolutes of good and evil to most.
Redeeming a character that personifies evil is just really not that interesting. For a redemption to be interesting, the character has to be multifaceted, and Unicron is not multifaceted. Unicron is a very very flat character. There is nothing there but the act of destruction. Unicron has about as much character development as a tornado, he just isn't a good basis for further character development, and especially character reversals.
Firebird1
But can Primus fight Crime?

EDIT: I meant this as a joke. I didn't realize where I was.
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