I think this is my first art here, anyways Here's my art. Messed up on his right hand.

eh, difficult subject matter. I'd say it still looks too robotic. looks kinda like a Megaman character, maybe. with a "human" version of a character, you want to interpret some aspects in ways that are clearly different. of course there's a huge range of possibilities. I would judge the results by the intended... I'm tired. if that sentance didn't end, it's ended now.